Drabble: Jalebi Baby

By nayika -
Khushi looked up at Arnav who was staring at the baby with a mixture of awe and amazement. He held his arms out for the baby and sat down next to her before kissing them both on the forehead. Khushi looped an arm through his and they sat in silent wonderment admiring their daughter. 

They were really going to have to think of a better name. She’d been calling the baby Jalebi ever since the first scan and eventually Arnav had started using the name too but Jalebi didn’t suit the beautiful little girl that was now in their life.

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  1. Shobhana19 April 2012 at 11:21

    Aww..that was a sweet but a really small one haan...And to top it all, I can just imagine them calling the baby some kind of name like that and Jalebi just suits ASR & KSR's kid I mean these two have a life around Jalebi...
    PS: btw Im waiting for your update on its not right...its been long and I want one with Arnav and Khushi not fighting plllzooo
    Love Shobhana
    (-Shobz.TaAnu IF)

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    1. nayika19 April 2012 at 11:28

      Well it's short because it has to be 100 words! :P

      Glad you liked it!

      It's Not Right and Breathing I like to take more time on because they're my favourites but it will be coming eventually!

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  2. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 11:27

    awesome just like small cute strawberry tarte..I am loving it. Long time away from india, so Missing Jilabi, french desserts are only relief.
    hatathbristi

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  3. Sree aka Uniquebluerose19 April 2012 at 11:32

    wow!!!!! how cute well anyways jalebi as calling name does suit any cute girl as the name is so sweet and cute....

    but then lets see what they name their baby which is their Arnav of Khushi............Arshiya?????
    well lets see!!!!

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  4. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 11:32

    awww jalebi baby
    trust khushi to think the name of their baby as jalebi

    Shruti_P

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  5. smitha19 April 2012 at 11:38

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  6. smitha19 April 2012 at 11:39

    cute but short. sorry i misspelled my earlier comment

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  7. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 11:41

    loved it...
    --savvz

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  8. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 11:41

    short n sweeeeeet..!!!
    yusam

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  9. ST19 April 2012 at 11:44

    Nayika you sure do have a gift.... you only used 100 words but made me feel warm and fuzzy inside.... seriously kudos to you and I really hope you don't stop writing

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  10. -Shwetz-19 April 2012 at 11:44

    hahaha khushi named her daughter jalebhi... that was so cute

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  11. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 11:50

    she named her daughter jalebi...thats really so cute!:D
    icegurl789

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  12. cmileyfreaky19 April 2012 at 12:03

    hahahahahha! jalebi baby! awww!

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  13. Ramzz19 April 2012 at 12:09

    That is really sweet.. :D
    Ok i have landed up on this blog after going throgh some of ur works n others in IF..
    Have a lot to catch up..

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  14. sweetygirl2819 April 2012 at 12:22

    arnav and khushi's daughter? i guess she ll be cute like khushi :) :) jelabi awesome name for their daughter nothing suits her better lol.. it was cute :D

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  15. ^^Siva^^19 April 2012 at 12:23

    Short and sweet! Jalebi! Finally it found its meaning for its existence.

    - Sivaranjani

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  16. nabila(18shabbo)19 April 2012 at 12:32

    he cud threaten to disown Khushi if Jalebi continued....
    no wait hadnt you written that fact wen the scans had come in one of the OS's...or am i mixing up again...

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    1. nayika19 April 2012 at 12:35

      Yep you're getting mixed up with someone else's word. HOW could you?! I'm so hurt :((

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    2. nabila(18shabbo)24 April 2012 at 06:50

      i did?....so sorry!!! :/
      i think i shud stop readin things simultaneously.
      But yay wudnt Jalebi Singh Raizada sound boho retro? it has a catch...

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  17. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 12:34

    That was so damn cute!!

    -Tanitha

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  18. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 12:36

    So dam cute

    BarunForever

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  19. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 13:19

    'Naam...Jalebi Bai'
    Trust Khushi to call her kid Jalebi LOL. But it was very short! You shoud continue this and maybe show ArHi arguing over potential names lol
    -TrueMuskaan

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  20. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 13:25

    aaaaaaw.... short but sweet.. lovd it..

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  21. Zuha Butt19 April 2012 at 13:30

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  22. Zuha Butt19 April 2012 at 13:31

    Awwwwww soooo sweet!

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  23. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 13:54

    aww!! sats soo nice.. only khushi can think dat!!
    -frenzyy

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  24. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 13:59

    Jalebi Baby! Hahaahahahaha, it was damn cute Shuheda! :P

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  25. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 14:03

    awww...choo cuteee!!!

    Subiscs

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  26. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 14:17

    hey nayika...

    that was soo cute...

    really loved it..: ]

    aakriti120

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  27. snoopy8419 April 2012 at 14:28

    that was really sweet loved it

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  28. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 14:49

    Very cute.. Absolutely loved it! Thanks for the pm! Love Simi (purplekid)

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  29. Raj aka GillRK19 April 2012 at 14:50

    short and sweet and more importantly FAB :)

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  30. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 15:15

    Aww short but damn sweet Nayika!! Loved reading it <3
    ShiningStar18

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  31. ChocoBloc_1219 April 2012 at 15:30

    Arrww :) just perfect :)
    LOL i can just imagine them calling their baby Jalebi... its cute :)

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  32. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 15:46

    THAT WAS SUPER CUTE

    Sirul

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  33. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 16:13

    Awww very cute! Loved it <3

    Luv Angel (IF)

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  34. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 16:25

    Cho chweet!!!!!
    and Jalebi ............only khushi cud call her baby jalebi :)
    IF: elle22

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  35. kathrina pheonix (DUMAS)19 April 2012 at 16:26

    awww loved it that was so cute they calling their baby jalibi loved the bonding with their baby

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  36. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 16:29

    Althought short but very cute and sweet OS
    arshi4evaneva

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  37. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 16:48

    Beautiful. I loved it.<3
    -MoNayaKiDeewani

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  38. Priya - ArhiDeewani19 April 2012 at 17:25

    Awww that was sooo cute and adorable!

    Totally loved it :)

    xxx

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  39. Unknown19 April 2012 at 18:54

    Loved it :)

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  40. sonia19 April 2012 at 19:54

    awww dat was so cute luvd it x

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  41. Arhi-fan(chhaya)19 April 2012 at 20:12

    That was a short sweet one. Hey just had jalebies after reading this. But much better name can be thought abt .

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  42. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 20:29

    A 100 words made me go...'ahh sooo scweeeet and cuuute...'

    Onlooker

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  43. Anonymous19 April 2012 at 22:27

    awww that was cute!
    And i like the name baby jalebi! :D
    insanelycrazy

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  44. Anonymous20 April 2012 at 00:00

    Aww... It was so cute. Jalebi!!! Lol. I would really like to see Arnav calling his daughter jalebi.
    rockinggirl5

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  45. Anonymous20 April 2012 at 00:11

    Very cute and sweet.

    -desisweetheart9 from IF.

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  46. Anonymous20 April 2012 at 01:04

    Awww cute

    Pinkpearlz (IF)

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  47. Megan20 April 2012 at 02:36

    Haha so cute!

    ~Electric_BuBBle

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  48. UthpalaDl20 April 2012 at 05:58

    aw......it ws sooo sweet....... <3

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  49. Anonymous20 April 2012 at 06:35

    Awwww!!!! This was soooo verrryy cute!!!

    SweetFarwii

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  50. shaz200920 April 2012 at 22:11

    Short but very sweet...Jalebis a good name for Arhi baby.

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  51. Anonymous20 April 2012 at 23:05

    Awwwwww sooo cute!!!!!

    Awwww ArHi and their little bundle of love!!!!

    It was beautiful dear!!!

    ~Harshiti4lyf

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  52. ArhiIPKKND21 April 2012 at 15:47

    awww so short though...

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  53. WiseGirl21 April 2012 at 22:41

    It's so in character for Khushi to nickname her daughter Jalebi. :D That was really cute and sweet. This is part of the Pregnant Khushi and her Jalebi series, right?

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  54. Anonymous22 April 2012 at 14:59

    Very Very Cute!

    -pgm7

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  55. Dhonkanbili1 May 2012 at 00:54

    whats a drabble

    btw very cute...

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  56. Unknown19 September 2012 at 15:24

    Aaaaaww!!

    I'm imagining "Dhara oil" advert, the kid's face lighting up when he says, "Jalebi!!!!"

    LOL!!

    damn cute!

    ~sri

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