FF: It's Not Right - Chapter 46
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Arnav caught up with Khushi just as she reached out to open
the car door and put his own hands out either side of her and effectively
trapping her between himself and the car. Khushi’s face fell and she turned
around indignantly planning to demand an explanation but instead found herself
shrinking back towards the car as Arnav loomed over her.
‘Why did you leave the cafe so quickly? We haven’t finished
talking.’
Khushi attempted a nonchalant shrug but had to abandon it
halfway as Arnav stepped closer towards her. ‘What was there left to say? I
told you my plan for Mamiji and then you ignored it completely and decided you
would deal with herself.’
Arnav stepped back slightly in order to scoff appropriately.
‘Jodiyan upar banke aate hain. Kuch kuch
hota hai Mamiji, aap nahi samjhenge. Really? What crap. If you think that
would work on Mamiji you really don’t know her at all Khushi. Besides you know that’s not what I mean.’
‘I... I have no idea what you’re talking about. Now could we
please go? Amma and Babuji will be wondering where I am.’
‘No. But can we please rewind to earlier in the day when I
told you something I’ve never said to
anybody before and you have yet to respond?’
Arnav had attempted to shift the conversation from Akash and
Payal numerous times in the past hour until Khushi’s attempts at evasion had
turned almost comical. This time there was no humour, Khushi simply looked at
him in defiance.
‘Mr Arnav Singh Raizada! If you don’t drive me home right
now I’ll... I’ll scream! Yes, I’ll scream and passersby will stop and I’ll... I’ll
tell them you’re harassing me.’
Arnav shrugged and smirked, ‘You’re going to scream and let
strangers know I love you and want you to reciprocate? Is that an empty threat
or a promise?’
‘No! I... I’ll... I’ll
do it. D... don’t think I won’t!’ Khushi poked him in the chest with one finger
which he promptly caught in his hand.
Arnav slid his hand around the rest of Khushi’s hand and
pulled it towards his chest, stroking his thumb lightly across the back and
leaned forward resting his forehead lightly against hers. ‘Go on Khushi, say
it.’ Arnav’s voice came out low and thick with emotion. He felt vulnerable, having
for the first time exposed himself to rejection in a relationship. He would
give himself good odds on his feelings being reciprocated by Khushi but he needed
the confirmation of her saying the words out loud.
Instead of another put-down or diversion tactic Khushi
lowered her eyes and shook her head softly and Arnav could see the blush
creeping up on her cheeks. Arnav felt a sudden urge to gather her up in his
arms and steal her away from the rest of the world. Deciding not to trouble her
any further that evening he bent his head and kissed her softly on one of her now
scarlet cheeks before whispering in her ear.
‘I’m letting you off tonight Khushi Kumari Gupta, but you
should understand this is only a brief respite. I’m going to hear you say those
three words to me very soon. And that’s a promise, not an empty threat.’
Khushi opened her mouth in shock determined to answer back
as he walked around towards the driver’s side but when they pulled up outside
her house half an hour later, Khushi was still lost for words. She muttered a
sulky goodbye and stepped out of the car, only for a smile to emerge at the
last minute as she remembered that Arnav had confessed his love to her. Khushi
quickly opened the door again and hopped back into the car where Arnav raised
his eyebrows at her in question, wondering if she’d forgotten anything.
Before he had a chance to ask Khushi why she’d come back she
kissed him square on the mouth and leapt back out of the car all before Arnav
got over the shock of her kissing him right in her neighbourhood where anyone
could have seen. ‘Wow,’ he exclaimed to himself as he started the car again. ‘One
second she’s angry and the next she kisses me like that? It’s official. I’ve fallen in love with a crazy woman.’
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I can never apologise enough for my looooong
absence! Anyway, hopefully we're back to regular updates now. Hope you
like this update and please comment especially so I know who's still interested :D
So glad to see you back!! Loved the update. Hope Khushi says the magical 3 words soon.
ReplyDeleteIF ID: nidsubh007
Very happy to see you still updating. I literally checked his blog everyday for an update.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!!
Too good
ReplyDeleteYAY! Finally... first Amy disappeared and then Jas and then you! I was so sad but now you're back and yes I hope to see you with your regular updates :)
ReplyDeleteYeh....progress!! Come on Arnav...lets see how creative you are getting fer to confess...! :p
ReplyDeleteHello stranger! Long time no see....?
ReplyDeleteLovely update...khushi is so cute....but dont make arnav suffer...make her confess soon...!!
Thanks for the pm
Cheers
What_the
Love it!
ReplyDeleteLoved it
ReplyDeleteHey! I love this story, this was a great chapter looking forward to more updates! love, Rhea
ReplyDeleteFinally... you're back.. Lovely update.. Looking forward for next update soon!! :)
ReplyDeletestill interested but i had 2 reed 5 chapters again cuz i 4gt watwaz heppenin. lol!
ReplyDeleteI had to blink twice to be sure that I was not imagining an update! :-P
ReplyDeleteThis was such an adorable chapter. They confessed....yayyy!! Khushi is still got to say it...but well....*shrugs* ;-)
Love your work, Nayika. Hopefully we'll be getting updates a little more regularly. Please??
finally!!!
ReplyDelete"One second she’s angry and the next she kisses me like that? It’s official. I’ve fallen in love with a crazy woman"
ReplyDeleteI loved this .. the great ASR is soo much in love .. waiting for the next update !!
And your back!!
ReplyDeleteI actually had to read the previous update just to remind me! lol
Great Update!!:D
Really nice to see ASR feel this way!
Omg..she actually kissed him on his lips!<3
Loved the last line! :D
-ipkkndfanforva
glad to see u back..
ReplyDeleteshe is crazy indeed..
awaiting the further updates..
Im alwez interested in anything u write.so do continue and do update more often
ReplyDeleteThanks...was waiting for an update. It was lovely.
ReplyDeleteawesum
ReplyDeletefallen in luv with crazy woman lol
Brilliant update.... Keep up the good work gal!
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet chapter. I've missed you very much and I'm glad you're back.
ReplyDeleteAww, it was a great chapter! I loved the little touches like Arnav holding Khushi's hand, his voice thick with emotion, his protective urge...*dreamy sigh*
ReplyDelete"‘No. But can we please rewind to earlier in the day when I told you something I’ve never said to anybody before and you have yet to respond?’"
bwahahaha. Great line!
I hope you regularly update! I love your writing.
Aww that was super cute :) love it and I missed your updates x
ReplyDeletewelcome back !!! and awesome update :)
ReplyDeleteOMG! FINALLY U UPDATED. i THOUGHT YOU STOPPED writing this. Sorry my cap lock was on!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much. will wait for updates.
-shree10
Yay.... Finally Nayika is back with her ever amazing writing and fiction......
ReplyDeleteAwesome continuation.... Can't wait for khushi to confess her love. <3
Yay! An update!
ReplyDeleteFirst the mock anger and then a kiss? Khushi is so cute. Arnav is right. He HAS fallen in love with a crazy woman.
So much love for this story. <3
thnx 4 updating....
ReplyDeletewaiting 4 next............
DilMaaneet 4m IF.
Thank God you are back! Look forward to the 3 words from her as much as Mr. Raizada.
ReplyDeletedont let her say the words too easily...he shud work fir it...the tv arnav had it too easy...
ReplyDeleteGood ur back can't wait fir updates
ReplyDeleteOMG your back with an update..okay I forgive you.
ReplyDeleteThe update was so sweet. I can't wait till Khushi says it too...but lets see how he's going to get it out of her. And oh la la she kissed him smack on the lips :D. And yes Arnav, you have fallen in love with a pagli :)
Oh so glad to have you back, had almost given up on you :)
ReplyDeleteNice update, hope Khushi has enough guts to confess too. She sure is crazy ;)
Not just you Arnav, I'm in love with a crazy woman called nayika myself...
ReplyDelete*sigh*
~hugs~
~sri