FF: It's Not Right - Chapter 48
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The shagun had gone wonderfully despite a few ill-favoured
comments from Mami. The whole family had turned up, even Dhruv and Arnav and
Khushi had watched excitedly as her sister received the mountains of exquisite
jewellery and clothes Khushi always knew she deserved. Khushi smiled for Payal’s
good fortune even as she carried the sarees into their bedroom to await further
inspection once the Raizadas had gone. She put the sarees down and turned
around where she immediately bumped into Arnav who had been following her, far
too closely it would seem, with the jewellery boxes.
‘Arnav!’
‘What?’ Arnav put the boxes down on the bed with one arm
still around Khushi, steadying her. ‘You bumped into me. Not that I mind,’ he
said drawing her closer. Khushi looked beautiful today, wearing what he would
term a traditional-Khushi outfit compared to the more sedate kurtas and jeans she had taken to
wearing lately. It was a deep violet and emerald green anarkali studded with silver sequins that caught the light
whenever she moved.
He had spent most of
the afternoon watching her, ignoring
the rituals going on around him and would have to thank Dhruv later for
the
occasional nudges and loud coughs that had saved him from getting caught
in his
appreciation of Khushi’s beauty whenever a family member had called upon
him. So when Khushi had announced she was moving all of the gifts into
the bedroom to make space for tea and snacks on the table he had jumped
up immediately to offer assistance ignoring the curious look Di, Nani
and Mami shot his way.
‘So Khushi.’
‘Arnav! What are you doing? Somebody will see!’ Khushi squirmed
trying to get away, her heart was beating so hard she was afraid it would jump
out of her throat at the thought of being caught in the arms of a man in her bedroom.
Arnav grinned and silenced her with a firm kiss although he manoeuvred
them away so they were hidden slightly by the wooden poles on the bed should
anyone come through the door. The kiss had the effect of temporarily causing Khushi’s
brain to cease functioning and when he released her she leaned in to him
putting her hands onto his shoulders and smiled up at him contentedly.
Arnav had planned to tease her some more and see if he could
force a confession out of her today when she wouldn’t have anywhere to run to
but her smile made him melt and he felt as if his heart was aching. He leaned
his forehead against hers and Khushi instinctively closed her eyes and clutched
his shirt tightly. ‘I have something for you,’ he whispered in her ear brushing
his cheek against hers.
‘Mmmm.’
‘Khushi, I have something for you,’ he repeated pulling
himself away slightly so she would open her eyes.
Khushi had been enjoying herself thoroughly. Arnav’s warm
forehead against hers, his breath caressing her lips and his heart beating underneath
her right hand all had her feeling completely at ease and safe. She opened her
eyes reluctantly and pouted, absolutely sure that whatever Arnav had to give
her couldn’t compare to what she had just experienced in his arms.
Arnav led her back around to sit on the bed and sat beside
her before reaching into the inner pocket of his jacket and pulling out a long
black box. Khushi began to question what was inside the box but her words died
on her lips as Arnav put a finger over them, silencing her before placing the
box on her lap.
‘Open it.’
His voice was husky almost a whisper and Khushi finally
realised this was not one of the ordinary gifts she had received from Arnav
every few dates when he had presented her with boxes of exotic chocolates or
colourful scarves. The room was silent until Khushi lifted the lid of the box
and it jerked up with a loud click of the hinge and she gasped.
Inside laying on top of a long black velvet cushion was a
string of pearls. They were luminescent and Khushi could see a myriad of
colours in each pearl as it reflected the light.
Arnav scrutinized Khushi’s face trying to gauge her response
to his gift and when he saw tears forming in the eyes he was so used to seeing
lit with laughter he lurched forward to take Khushi into his arms. ‘Khushi, I’m
so sorry. Please don’t cry. I didn’t mean to remind you of that nigh; I just
wanted to make up for what I did. Payal’s getting married now but what I did to
you that can't be fixed and I...’
Khushi looked up and reached a hand out to cup Arnav’s
cheek. ‘Arnav please don’t. I’m not thinking about that honestly. That’s not
why... It’s just so beautiful.’ She lifted the necklace out of its box with her
other hand and held it up in between them before turning her head slightly and
presenting Arnav with her neck. ‘Will you...?’
Arnav ran his fingers lightly through the ends of Khushi’s
hair. It had begun to grow again, the ends feathery soft and if he was honest
Arnav missed her waist-length hair. He pushed her hair aside and over one
shoulder then leant over the other shoulder, his nose nuzzling at the beauty
spot by her ear as she passed him the necklace.
Khushi’s chest heaved and she jerked slightly as Arnav lay
the cold and smooth pearls across her neck, his fingers following their path
until he reached the clasp. His fingers lingered lightly over her shoulders
after the clasp had been fastened and he stroked his thumbs up and down on the
back of her neck.
‘Do you like it?’
‘I love it.’
Arnav bent down and placed a light kiss at the base of her
neck, ‘and me?’
‘I...’
‘Arre Sanka Devi! Arnav Babua! Where are you?’
The moment shattered like crystal around their feet and
Arnav’s head fell forward onto Khushi’s shoulder in defeat while Khushi bit her
lip to stop herself giggling and patted the top of his head sympathetically. ‘Come
on, we should go before Buaji comes inside.’
Khushi stood up and began to move towards the door before
she felt Arnav’s hand clasp around her wrist. She turned back to where he was
still sitting on the bed and now looking up at her with a determined look on his
face.
‘You can’t escape forever,’ he said as he stood up beside
her. ‘I’ll make you say it Khushi Kumari Gupta or my name isn’t Arnav Singh Raizada.’
He brushed another soft kiss against Khushi’s cheek before opening the door to
let them both out.
---
The air was thick and heavy, an impending storm on the way.
Khushi could hear the sound of crickets singing in the garden and small lizards
clicking their tongues as they crawled across the outer walls of the house.
There had been a brief moment of panic a few hours earlier when
Amma had questioned where the necklace had come from but Khushi had averted the
question neatly by asking Amma which of the beautiful new jewellery sets Payal
should wear at the mehndi which had
been arranged for the following week.
She was now sitting on the bench outside the house giving
Payal some privacy as she talked on the phone to Akash. Khushi would have taken
the opportunity to talk to Arnav but she knew he had a meeting in the morning
to prepare for. She sighed as she rubbed her hands across her arms, warming
them against the cool breeze that was swirling around her and then hastily
picked up her phone from beside her.
I love... the necklace
Khushi grinned as she pressed send on her phone, her other
hand clutching her necklace. A phone call would be disturbing but he could
surely spare a few moments to read and reply to her text.
The screen flashed and the phone vibrated almost five minutes
later just when she had decided to give in and call him but as Khushi began to
press the button to read the message she felt a hand on her shoulder.
‘Babuji!’
Shashi smiled and hugged his daughter before sitting down
beside her. ‘How is my little butterfly tonight? Are you sad that your Jiji’s
going to leave you?’
‘Of course not! I’m so happy for Jiji. I just want her to
have everything she wants in life and Akashji is such a nice person.’
‘He is isn’t he? Our Payal is so lucky. But you don’t need
to worry. I have no plans to send my little butterfly anywhere for a long time
yet but when I do I promise you, he’ll be one in a million.’
Khushi hugged her Babuji to hide her smile, happy that there
were no plans for her marriage yet. She knew Arnav would need a lot of time but now she knew how he felt
she was prepared to wait.
---
Arnav had written and then deleted his reply to Khushi three
times before finally closing his eyes and pressing send as quickly as he could
before he changed his mind. He was taking a risk, he knew that but he knew that
in business only those that were willing to put themselves out there got
results.
However as he lay wide awake at 3 in the morning with still
no response from Khushi he wondered what her silence could mean. Was she upset?
Confused? Angry that he had sent an impersonal text instead of calling her or speaking
face to face? Or did she simply not understand his meaning? Should he have been
less subtle?
---
When the cold began to bite Khushi and her Babuji had gone
inside to discuss wedding plans and the state of their finances over hot tea
and fresh pakoras that Khushi had insisted on making and so it was nearly 3 in
the morning before she finally read the text message from Arnav.
I’ve decided to make
an amendment to my earlier statement. If you don’t say those three words to me
by the end of this wedding, I’ll change my name. And if you do, you’ll have to
change yours.
O My God !!! What a proposal !!! I loved it :)
ReplyDeletethe best proposal, EVER!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWow! Fantastic proposal! Did not see that coming.
ReplyDeleteIF ID: nidsubh007
That was lovely...thanks for the update.
ReplyDeletewhat a lovely proposal..absolutely adorable!!
ReplyDeletevery excited to see you back in regular action and looking fwd to more!!!
thanks for the pm..
cheers
what_the
Loved it.. A very unique way of proposal without being cheesy & all mushy mushy.. :)
ReplyDeleteArnav assisting Khushi with the gifts...I wonder if Anjali or Nani realised that something is cooking up. ;-) Dhruv coughing and nudging Arnav....hilarious! And cute!
ReplyDeleteI loved how you connected Arnav's gifting of the pearl necklace to Khushi with the one where he broke it down, trying to make up to her. I know a lot of people wanted this in the show so I'm glad that you had it here. :-)
That proposal was freaking AWESOME!! I can't wait to know Khushi's response. Here she was all prepared that Arnav would take long to adjust to the idea of marriage and now he's the one proposing. I love how the story is going!! Reminds me of the best days of IPKKND!! :-D
Nayika, I can't tell you how glad I'm that you're back!! *hugsss*
Oh god!!!!! What an awesome chapter!!!! N the proposal..... The best most wonderful, freaking awesome!!!!
ReplyDeleteBang!!! Cant wait... Update soooooonnn! :D
that was so lovely..dhruv is really cute..
ReplyDeleteawaiting the wedding n their name changing game..
I’ve decided to make an amendment to my earlier statement. If you don’t say those three words to me by the end of this wedding, I’ll change my name. And if you do, you’ll have to change yours.
ReplyDeletedid he just propose her !!!!! A proposal in full ASR style :)
Okay that is the cuuuutest proposal :)
ReplyDeleteomg that was amazing! you sure do come back with a bang!lol
ReplyDeleteI loved the little scene of Arnav and dhruv- they seem to at least to be trying to get to know each other.
LOL this is so ASR style. You stayed true to his character, I loved the update!
ReplyDeleteOh man! that is soooooooo Arnav! what a proposal!! hahahahah...loved it!! Khushi is gonna faint!! or completely ignore the proposal part and take it as a challenge! the woman is cray-cray, i don't know how she'll react...me? i'm jumping in joy here!!
ReplyDelete~hugs you super tight~
~sri
BTW, i have literally spammed your blog with my comments, i'm sorry but i have done NOTHING but read your blog from yesterday morning...i was up till 4 reading this story, and I still have to send you hugs for the 30 chapters i read offline...don't block me please, i'm not spamming, i'm just loving your writing to an obsessive level...
ReplyDelete<3
~sri
I am loving this story... just caught up with the lats few chapters... hehehe... ASR is issuing out challanges... wonder who will win this one :P
ReplyDeleteKC
I am just loving the Way their relationship is moving forward!!!!! What a proposal man!!!!!
ReplyDeleteBEST.PROPOSAL.EVER.!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOH MY GOD!!!
I just read this whole FF in one go and I L.O.V.E your writing!!!!
Please PLEASE PLEASE continue soon! I cant wait to read more!
awesome. loved the story and its characters.read it in go
ReplyDeleteWow!! Now that's a proposal (albeit through text) that I would expect from Arnav Singh Raizada! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the next update... please update soon na.
I love the way Arnav express his feelings and intention in his message:-)
ReplyDeleteI was waiting to finish the story to comment...
ReplyDeleteBut I think I just died and went to heaven...yes, that's what the proposal did to me! I've already read it ten times and still can't wipe the stupid grin off my face... Ah...what a proposal...my heart is bursting with bliss and warmth and love and whatnot!! *dreamy sigh* ;) <3
-UV_Arshi (IF)